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January 30, 2008

A top contender in the Error Derby

In a competition for number of errors crammed into one sentence, the following, from the Albany Times-Union, would surely be a top contender:

Phthalates (Di-exyl-hexyl phthalate), a carcinogen, has been linked to birth defects in the male reproductive system. It can be found in nail polish, deodorant, fragrance, hairspray and lotions.

About the only thing right in this sentence is the spelling of the phthalate, known familiarly as DEHP. Otherwise:

Posted by Marian at January 30, 2008 12:36 PM

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